Rock n' Roll Queen

lol If you mean it didn't rhyme when you said it wasn't "Poetic," it wasn't supposed to lol. The rhyming in the beginning just happened. But it is still a ...

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it :D

WOW...this is...amazing! Deep and profound. Nothing bad I can say about it.

Thi is absolutely great. Haunting, chilling, earth shattering. Words really cannot describe how much I love this. Great job! However, I am sad that it ended. I loved the simplicity ...

I have to say that I love this, although I will have to agree with the others. I wanted more suspense, but you did a great job holding my attention. ...

I loved all of the details. I had to wonder about nothing! which I often find to be a problem with other people's writings. They always have me wondering. But ...

I loved this poem. It's awesome. You are really good. :D

As I was reading over my story. I realized that I started a lot of paragraphs with ''I'' and thought that it was really annoying. Sorry about that. I will ...

Yeah, this should not be under lyrics. It was my first time posting, and I accidentally put it in the wrong place. *Oops* MadHatter- I get what you are saying, ...

"The sunset, Sweeps across the sky. Its beauty, None can define. All the colors, Too numerous to name. The sunset appears every day, And never is the same. So wild, ...

I absolutly loved this story :D It was awsome. Good work

I liked the poem. A little repetitive in the beginning, but other than that I liked it. :D

I loved how the animal analogy :) Great song, I liked it.

I really liked it. Great job :)

I loved how everything flowed together. I really liked this poem. I felt that I could relate to it. Good work :D